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Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2013 5:39 PM Title: Goddess Feet

Well, that's sad.  Unless you plan to surprise us, we've just been told how this will end.  Miserably.  No future, not even as a toy.  Its still early in the story, maybe they'll be an unexpected plot twist.



Author's Response:

Your right itbis very early in the story. The speech itself was more of a way to scare Michael.  I want to continue this story for a while, he won't be handheld size for a while, I'm trying to focus on the gradual shrinking Michael is experiencing so you have nothing to fear.

 

- Midgetme

Reviewer: parkeryellowstone Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2013 5:37 PM Title: Goddess Feet

this is a good story, I'm not a big fan of foot fiction sadly but I do love the idea of having women shrink me out of my clothes lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope to explore different themes as the story progreesses and not just another feet stories. You are more than welcome to suggest what you'd like to see happrn to Michael :)

 

- Midgetme

Reviewer: parkeryellowstone Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 5:43 PM Title: Introduction

This is pretty good so far.  I look forward to see what you can do with it. I think it's cooler if the shrinking takes longer in a slow shrinking story but still cool.  And I like the idea of them being able to control his size maybe they make him smaller as punishment :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I agree, I don’t want him to shrink dramatically and have him handheld within the next few chapters. I want to focus on the humiliation Michael will suffer at the hands of Trish and Gracie. Don’t worry, there will be all sorts of punishments at his size.


- Midgetme

 

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