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Reviewer: IsabelChris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2019 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: FOLLOW UP TO BEING SWALLOWED UP

Wow, the very idea of such an online manual for both giant women and tiny guys, showing best pratices for being successful in a vore attempt, is exciting!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I tried to make it humorous as well. I hope it's helpful guide.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 17: PERFECT LUNCH

Better Contestant #1 than me.

;-D

Author's Response:

Contestant #1&3 agree with you, I'd imagine.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 15: SHRINK WELL BEFORE SERVING

What about a female Cop?  If she decides to arrest a potental 'meal', should she advise him of his right's before shrinking him?

Would he even have any rights?  Oh, she could give him the right to remain 'shrunken'!  ;`)''

A whole new meaning for the phrase, "Cuff-um -N- Stuff-um", 'palm-um -N-pop-um'

-I love a giantess in uniform....  ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely, or would the cops be trying to stop the shrinking and eating of people? I guess it depends on who's writing.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14: FINDING A TINY

.........said the spider to the fly.



Author's Response:

Actually I was around 5 years old when I heard the song about the old woman who swallowed a fly, sung by a female teacher. It gave me thoughts about a middle aged woman swallowing a boy.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15: SHRINK WELL BEFORE SERVING

Great chapter title! And the narrative text certain doesn't lead to bafflement as to what the author is talking about. That being said, I congratulate you.*

*As we are now tied at fifteen chapters apiece in our current updates. LOL!

Author's Response:

Oh yes, so we are. I couldn't think of anything profound to say about your Knights of Mellion Chapter 15, so I just made a similar comment.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 14: FINDING A TINY

"...a hunger to be loved."

Who knew a pun could be so profound?

Author's Response:

And so true indeed

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: TINY FOR SWEETS

Two words: very juicy. ;-D

Author's Response:

And watch for the pun in the title of chapter 15

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 12: GULPING ETIQUETTE

Then, rinse and repeat?

Author's Response:

And he goes down smelling like roses

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11: OUTDOOR LUNCHES

Two more chapters, already? Man! You're getting good at this.

Author's Response:

I wrote them all last week. I just post them once a day to avoid overkill (and running out of material).

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: COOKING YOUR TINY

Might/... or Mite Roast.   Hmm, after placing him into the oven, use ceramic pan 'Always', never metal...    Then, (even though your about to 'COOK' him alive) be sure you don't get any spices into his teeny lil' eye's!

Pay Attention to his reaction's to being eaten?  Oh, don't embarrass him either, by going somewhere public, NOOOooo   There might be a teenage giantess capture him away from you, taking him away to her secret hide-away never to be seen again...

Leaving you, to aways wonder what became of your LUNCH?  ;`)''''

 



Author's Response:

Some very good tips there. You could do a chapter or two yourself.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: COOKING YOUR TINY

Almost reads like that recipe for Swiftian infants.

Author's Response:

I think I'd enjoy being Brobdingnag cuisine actually.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 9: KITCHEN TIPS FOR GIANTESSES

English translation: enough foreplay. On to the main cour...I mean, "event!"

;-)

Author's Response:

Now there are two great punsters reviewing this (Carycomic being the other of course), making it much more fun for me the author.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: KITCHEN TIPS FOR GIANTESSES

Details, Details, Details,  it's all in the DETAILS.....  ;`)""""""  

- I just had a funny thought,....what if someone from another planet somehow managed to break through, and receive wireless internet signal and clicked onto GTSWorld, totally by accident and then stumbled onto this story....

WHAT?

Timescribe, you might have just saved earth from being invaded by aliens!  ;)



Author's Response:

Well it reminds me of a friend of mine in 2001, a teenager named Blake, who wrote a story about me saving earth from Galactus (Marvel Comics' World ravaging unbeatable villain) by proving that my farts were more powerful than Galactus's power cosmic. He had me blasting both Galactus and his Elemental Converter out of the solar system.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 8: FOLLOW UP TO BEING SWALLOWED UP

And, that's the long and short of it.

X-D

Author's Response:

From our POV at any rate. Let's see what the giantesses think of chapter 9

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 7: MAKING THE MOST OF HER KITCHEN

"As far as she knows..."

Bwa-hahahahahahahahaha!

;-D

Author's Response:

 I feel honoured to have once again been the recipient of the Carycomic Bwa-hahahhahahhhahha award. Well whether or not she ever finds out can be up to the shrunken man. In fact that's covered  in the next chapter called "Follow up to being swallowed up."

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: MAKING THE MOST OF HER KITCHEN

Whoa, the 'cooking-part' sounds a little bit dangerous!  Although, a night spent snuggling would be a most- desireable situation....

I just can't get into the swallowing.  Everything leading up to it, YES!  Although, the constant threat of it lingering within your mind, as to 'if' she might decide to just casually take you, without you knowing...well. that in itself is very exciting!

The death part is what ruins it for me.... :=|



Author's Response:

I agree, and that's why it's important for all shrinking men to have a teleporter with a recall factor. That's why I gave the book the particular pun title I chose (adapted from "How to succeed in business without really trying."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: "LET'S DO LUNCH ... OR DINNER"

Well, they do say there is someone for everyone. Though, I--personally--doubt it.

Author's Response:

If there are more giantesses out there, they need to come out of the closets (presumably very large closets LOL) and contact us.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: LOCATIONS & DISCLOSURE

Well, hopefully, I won't be the only reviewer making your word count worthwhile. Maybe Aaron, Amanda, or even Wildcatman will be reviewing the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Well you were right. Wordsmith and Wildcatman have sent in interesting reviews. This has drawn the most attention of anything I've ever written (at least since Ambloome Princess of Giants in 2010) and it's not even really a story.

Reviewer: WordSmith Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 6: "LET'S DO LUNCH ... OR DINNER"

Another awesome chapter! Looking forward to what is coming next!



Author's Response:

Wait 'til I get to the chapters addressed to the giantesses. They'll entertain the Tinies too!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: "LET'S DO LUNCH ... OR DINNER"

What if the giant woman tricks you?  Realizing what your lil' plan is, she agrees to place you into her mouth, and allow you to wollow around untill your satisfied, then gently swallows you alive, only to quickly cough you back up and  casually start 'Chewing you UP!'   :-(    then what?  



Author's Response:

Good question. Well you'd have to see it coming in time to teleport recall out of there, or her trick would succeed. (Suitable teleportation features on shrinking machines were covered in an earlier chapter).

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