Reviews For Home Invasion
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Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 Punishment

Very nice, I love seeing new chapters of this even though the role reversal (innovative though it is) isn't really my thing.  You do a good job building tension with the combination of her helplessness and how completely outclassed they are whenever she's able to move a little bit.

The "post-apocalyptic" hardened band of survivors is great, it's like you mixed The Walking Dead and The Borrowers.  I love this universe.

After chapter 4 I really wanted her to adopt Linda, or just put out leftovers for them every once in a while and occasionally have a movie night.  I don't think that's gonna happen any more, LOL.

 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 Punishment

I expected them to shove the curling iron up her ass.

Yeah, this was justice, but if Ed would have thought about it a little more he wouldn't have been killed, unless he had somnophilia on top of feet.

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