[Report This]Date: October 28 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Nice! You do really well at drawing out the little details, above and beyond the call of duty. As a result the story really drew me in. Unique too. The giant submissive doesn't show up that often in this genre - for obvious reasons, haha.
I did like the ending, although I was a bit disappointed that she never got free while the whole group was there :) The giant/tiny interaction was somewhat restricted to "murderous" and "helpless" with not a lot in between.
I'll keep an eye out for anything from you in the future...
[Report This]Date: October 28 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
I was hoping for Jennifer going full scale revenge on the tiny people who tortured her but that's OK since she's really the 'sub' kind of person.
It's a shame though since that would have been material for at least 5 more chapters. Ah, well. Ending this story hopefully means you'll write a new one soon? Please do. I love your style of writing.
Ending a story in time is propably a better way than to drag it out without any real end sight as where I am stuck at the moment...
[Report This]Date: October 27 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
assuming that Linda had crawled under the stove... Oh, I think maybe she decided to stay a while with the giantess Jennifer, the two females had made a connection of some sort, while Linda held her captive within her own apartment naked and bound, she was somehow reduced to the tinies level, and therefore accepted by them, (aside from the accidental squashing of the foot fetishist Ed) and Linda felt her tiny pussy tingling as she watched them 'Punishing' the bound giantess...
Maybe Jennifer would like a tiny pussy licker. Linda, she could get right into it ...;`) I'm sure!
Great story! I hope to see alot more of your tale's...Carnaj2!
Date: October 24 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Wow, let me tell you what wow. This is very impressive and a WONDERFUL story. I absolutely LOVE how you switched the roles here. Usually it's the tinies who are getting tortured and are helpless as some uncaring and cold hearted giantess haplily tortures them. But this? This is a beautifully done role swap. I actually hope Jennifer gets free and shows those tinies a thing or two, starting with Linda. Maybe not kill them, but certainly punish.
Date: October 24 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Good story, definitely got me guessing as to what will happen next.
Hopefully she gets free and extracts vengeance upon the tinies!
Date: October 22 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Very interesting..... I can't work out whether she will get free and kill them all, or look after them.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Linda's life being so similar to Jennifers is a strange realization, except for the size differance of course... the poor pregnant Anne being with child that will eventually kill her is a horrifying consequence!
You've painted a very realistic storyline here. The survival instinct of the tinies is fasinating. The varying size of the affected 'tinies' is something to concider 'useful' for a rougue group of individuals. They could definitly use that to their advantage...
I love the way that you've discribed the tinies and their personal plight. Makes me wonder if anyone would have any compassion for them, in this day and age...
Very suspencefull!
I love this story... Great work Carnaj2 !
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
The tinies are sympathetic, and you feel so badly for them, you almost want them to do something to Jennifer... great job.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Whoa, interesting premise. You've definitly got a unique angle here, you deserve props for that. Interested to see where this goes.
Date: October 19 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Oh man how's she gonna get un-cuffed now? Great start!
[Report This]Date: October 18 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Great Stuff! Can't wait for your next chapter....