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Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad.. you back again. i can't wait.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wondered how long it was going to take her to realize who those belonged to...

Not the sharpest tool in the shed, eh?



Author's Response:

Ehh... at first she thought it was a dream... until she woke up and smelled the honey. 

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

As a fan of this series, I'm a little confused by the way you present life for young men in the post-balancing world.  In your previous stories it seemed that you took great pains to ensure love matches between the sexes and the Goddess encouraged it and tried fix potential problems.  So I'm a little troubled by parents giving their son away to a middle age woman to be used as a sex toy.  Is this common in the world that you envision?



Author's Response:

Great question! As you have seen in some of the stories, there is also great confusion after the Rebalancing, even chaos, as women and even gangs of women take men for their pleasure. (Remember the first chapter of "A World of Breasts and Buttocks" or the street scene in "Fear of Commitment"?) Mike's mom, which we haven't introduced, was concerned about throwing her son into that chaos and so she arranged a mother-daughter situation. Perhaps she just wasn't comfortable with Mike making his way in this world, which is still new when Mike is 18. Sandra would use Mike until the daughter was mature enough for a boyfriend. Of course, we haven't introduced the daughter yet, and she may still say no to the whole thing! In which case, Sandra (the mature woman) would be responsible for a solution. This is not meant to be Mike's lifetime relationship, just a situation where he can learn giving pleasure to a woman and then be ready for his life partner. Think of Sandra as a teacher or mentor. As you will see, she can be quite gentle.

Mike also needs, as did the man caught by Amber's mom in AWBB, and indeed all men, to psychologically adjust to being small. There are male archetypes that could be used to describe his situation. Just as king, warrior, magician and lover could be used to describe men in the big world before ROS, one could use words such as explorer, pet, or toy to describe men's roles post ROS. Mike needs to adopt a new way of seeing himself and the talking sex toys are a vehicle to help him accomplish that. By making the toys sentient and helping him find bonds of brotherhood and friendship with the toys, the Goddess of Love is giving Mike a sort of psychodrama version of high school/college to work things out in his head. By seeing them as beings worthy of respect, Mike is coming to see what they do, in terms of existing to give pleasure to a woman, as an endeavor worthy of respect and seeing his life as having a noble purpose. Thanks for the question riczar!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

What...


Uh... I don't know what to make of talking sex toys...

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this.  The speaker writing to Jason does a nice job re-establishing your fictional universe in the context of rights and how the world sees men.  The greeting card was a nice touch, and I enjoyed the semi-humorous but still pathetic exchange between your protagonist and the sex toys.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Believe it or not, you can google that greeting card... at least the first part!

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