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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is this story your first. I love it, I just wis there was more detail. You should expand on Olivers experiences. This is the only thing letting the story down.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

"...just for a minute..."

LOL! Yeah, right. A shrunken man born and raised in NYC could escape from this predicament in just a minute...or less!!

Nice addition, dude. :-)

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