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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:47 AM Title: The Rise

OK! It's official: I'm hooked. Enough, so that I--almost literally--cannot wait for Volume 2.

Although, I really wish she had kept the black jacket and red bikini. ;-)

Author's Response: Great! I'm happy you're on board. I hope to make the sequel even better than its prelude. Things only get crazier from here.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 6:45 AM Title: The Rise

Alas, poor Kyrie.

So, Zarelda's taken over the United States. In a country where democracy has such deep roots, I imagine there would be a lot of resistance and/or grudging acceptance no matter what she does.

I like that she was thirty feet and then fifty feet. It would be good to have her height correspond with her power.

I found her nudity a bit odd, though there's nothing really wrong with it. She can do that, of course, it's just not normally done.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 12:44 AM Title: The Rise

Wasn't expecting the big bad to win.

 

Well played.

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