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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

Intense! :-)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

The end is nigh...



Author's Response: ...or perhaps a new beginning

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

I feel like as this story has progressed, it has become more convoluted. Nice, but makes me think: "What the hell? Who the fuck is this? What happened to, eh, nevermind. Maybe it'll get clearer, or not."

I feel like the original, older chapters were much more immersive. I still like the story, but got so confused with the plot I got out of reading it.



Author's Response: Wow. I'm sorry that my story has confused you so much. This is the first complaint I have received saying this. I have to ask, what specifically has confused or not made sense? Your input would be greatly appreciated.

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