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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

P.S.---you're not a downer, Shaun. Everybody knows that, sooner or later, even the half-full glass becomes completely empty!*

*See? That would've been a whole lot funnier if I had gotten it right, the first time. ;-)

Author's Response: Actually it wasn't even Shaun that said that. It was Victoria haha still funny though

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great stuff as always.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

@Shrunken Scholar: Always glad to be of service.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 18 2014 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

I decided to keep it short. Not a lot of action in this chapter, but things should pick up in the next chapter. It was still pretty interesting to read.

Constructive criticism is appreciated and enjoy! We're reaching the end! So soon? How much fifty+ foot Zarelda action are we going to get? This story has a lot of potential for plots and adventures once Zarelda's in a position to take over the area.



Author's Response: I've never been much for the " giantess destroying a city underfoot " genre. I knew that I wanted to touch on it in this story. Now that I have, I find that I like it more than I originally thought. And your review has given me a great idea, so thank you.

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