[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing opener. Btw: "prequel" is technically a sequel that's set earlier than the story that inspired it. If this particular story is the first in even a two-part series, then the proper technical term is "prelude."
Example: "THE HOBBIT, as a novel, was prelude to the 'Lord of the Rings' trilogy of books. THE HOBBIT, as a movie franchise, is prequel to the LOTR franchise."
[Report This]Date: May 15 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, so she gets everything she wanted in the end. Or is it? Victoria still lives, this could all change if you ever do a sequel.
Date: May 10 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like it will be the end of Zarelda. Unless there is one final twist.
Date: May 10 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
IWH (I Will Have).
;)
Date: May 10 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is the finale. However, I do not think you'll be disappointed with the end result. Have faith!
Date: May 10 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Next chapter is the final :(
Date: February 25 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Zarelda and Shaun again? I was hoping we would get a city rampage by Zarelda before he shrinks her down.
Author's Response: Not even the best laid plans turn out how you expect. You'll have to wait and see.
Date: February 25 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Great update
But I have a question
"What happens with your other story"
Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure what you're asking, but I'll try answering. I am currently writing two stories, I like to put out a few chapters at a time and then switch to the other. So, I am now switching to my other current story.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2013 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liking the story so far. Keep up the good work!
Date: November 04 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is heading, Zarelda has him now and I sense he will be inch to her very soon. Will Zarelda be towering over the city skyline soon?
Author's Response:
I'm still not entirely sure where I'm taking this story, but anythings possible. Thanks for the feedback
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far. I hope she goes beyond 50 ft tall and goes full Mega in size.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well theoretically if you choose to keep her as an antagonist then she may want to consider a different kind of prison. (I personally would think trapping them inside herself would probably be the most effective but that's just my idea.
Hope you can continue and see if anything interesting occures.
(Also hope I can get a little feedback on my own story)
Date: September 26 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I do want more, do write more as it is an interesting introduction to set up the antagonist's backstory. Lets see what hijinks Zarelda gets up to in the modern world.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! It means a lot.