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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 7:19 AM Title: Separation

Brilliant, love the whole story but I can't help but feel Caitlin will find Jack again to finish things off. I don't know if she will get whats coming to her but she'll definitely show up. 



Author's Response:

I like your instincts...!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 1:39 AM Title: Separation

Feels like the story is over. All these goodbyes, the memories, things back to normal. A guess a conclusion is coming up.

Let me guess. The final chapter is titled: "Completion".

Right? I know there's a lot more words out there that can fit, but I think this fits best.

Or it could be "satisfaction" since we are all satisfied with this ending.

I will miss Penny. She was good for this story. A symbol of hope, a protector and a sign that not all Alphas are bad. She gave Jack a new chance at life and I wish them all the best.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

If this were a trilogy, this would be the end of the first film... or something like that. I'm still not entirely sure how long it will be, or exactly how things will pan out, but there's a lot of ideas and scenarios being worked through and this is just the end of the beginning, in some respects.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 6:00 PM Title: Separation

Masterfully poignant interlude.

Author's Response:

Why thank you!

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