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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter four

And so the slaughter continues. I only wish I had more opportunities to indulge myself in reading, so that I could enjoy this story as it is updated.

God I loved it when she swallowed those cars. I'm a huge fan of mouth play and vore, so the thought of that massive giantess tossing those citizens into her mouth was quite exciting.

I look foward to reading more



Author's Response:

Thanks AW! I too have this problem where I can't really find the time to simply sit down and enjoy reading the updated stories these days. I have to catch up to your latest chapter on Maria's Prison, quite a few chapters on the Silver Haired Giantess, Splinter's Edge etc.

Hopefully next month, I'll have more free time. Can't want to also start writing my next story too. :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter seven

Awesome chapter, cant wait to see what you have planned with the next story!



Author's Response:

Thanks man! I see you've updated your silverly giantess story! Quite a few chapters I have to catch up to actually. :)

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2013 12:57 AM Title: Intro

Very awesome addition. I'm glad that she didn't stay weak to the tinies.

Also, I really like the little singled-out senarios... Like at the very beginning of the story where she has the tiny on her finger tip, and where the business woman seemingly offered herself to the goddess, and also like in this chapter where the many fell onto her arm. Very sexy and humiliating to those people haha. Hope to see more!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I try to put in some of those now and then because it really exemplifies her relationship with the tinies and they are much more personal in nature. But considering her scale, the fact that she's rampaging on a city, I'm finding it hard to consistently do so in every chapter. I definitely will try and put one or two more before I end it. :)

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter three

I apologize for not reading in a while my RL has been hectic. Anyways I love the continous slaughter and I look foward to reading the rest of this.

Also...

"she was the ultimate monster because she represented everything that the human mind feared. She represented the ultimate unknown, the first basic fear, an entity so familiar in form, but so strange and terrifying in scale and behaviour at the same time that it was too difficult to accept and make sense for the human mind."

Dude... I think you just sumed up the whole fetish in a single paragraph.



Author's Response:

Heh, I'm very glad you liked that part! Since I've started writing, I've found myself to like lingering on those psychological aspects that define our fetish, and it's great that you've picked that up! :)

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 5:36 PM Title: Intro

Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but I got the impression when she first appeared and looked to Raymar's skyscraper and smirked at him.  It makes me wonder if she's going to be looking for him at some point and why would she be?



Author's Response:

Yes, she'll meet him, I'm saving it for the end. :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter six

I loved that some of her deep gentleness came through in this chapter! Very well done, I can see that your beginning to flesh her out a bit, I would love to get more backstory on her!



Author's Response:

You think so? I was hoping to wrap it up in the near future to be honest because I have another idea with a real and deep story behind it. Thought to try and deepen her a bit here before I end it just to leave something to wonder because I'm not really sure what direction to take it or whether people would like it if I decided to add a plot to this.

BTW, you reminded me to check out what happened to our Silver-haired Giantess... :D

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 3:39 PM Title: Intro

Once again, very nice addition to the story. I love the brutality and certainly don't mind all the nice dirty stuff ;)

Hope you can post more soon. Cheers



Author's Response:

Thanks! Already working on the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2013 8:42 AM Title: Intro

Love this story! Cannot wait to see her lose control and go crazy! Please keep 'em coming!



Author's Response:

And that'll happen very soon I hope!

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter two

I enjoyed the cat and mouse part near the beginning where she got inside her preys head. It made the slaughter that followed afterwards quite exciting and at the same time much more personnal because we the reader had been given both sides of the disaster.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I guess what you described was my aim, and I must have done well! :D

Reviewer: Ebeur Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 6:24 AM Title: Intro

Awesome beginning! Really like the scenario and the style...I hope it's getting filthy. xD 



Author's Response:

Thanks! It'll definitely sway in that direction! :D

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 9:34 PM Title: Intro

Very nice job on the intro. I loved to get absorbed in the details and vivid imagery when reading such good writing. Well done! The first chapter is excellent as well. Cannot wait to see how her lust builds up! :)



Author's Response:

It is going to be slow, and painful for the local population, I can assure you that! :D

But thanks for the review! I'm especially glad that you enjoyed the intro too. I started this as just a girl having her way with a city but I just can't seem to get myself to write a story without some sort of a plot, no matter how basic it is.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter one

 A disabled city and a giantess. sounds like a good time to me.

Anyways I enjoyed how the story is told somewhat from her perspective, I believe this writing choice will serve to make the subsequent chaos that much more personal.

In a way this story feels like one of those giantess FX videos where they destroy the model cities, but about a thousand times better.

Good to see your name on the front page again Ifcfan



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks a lot AW! Yeah, I'll be sticking to her perspective mostly, sometimes jumping to a more 'local' narrative just to cover stuff that she simply can't see from her POV or doesn't care about. And I'll use Raymar's POV too sometimes as a change of pace.

And I feel I can do a lot better than the last chapter. When I began writing, I never anticipated how much the creativity inside of you depended on your mood, and lately I've just been plain bored. Oh well, time to read those classics of Grildrig and co.

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