thanks. i'm really glad you enjoy my story. yes, i had to clean up the grammar as i didn't realize that so many people found it annoying. i guess that's because i can read a story without caring about capitalization but these stories aren't meant for me =) i'm going to be writing more chapters on this story rather than "tales of a shrinking sister" because i find this story easier to write. i find it more enjoyable to write "unaware" content but i'm sure i'll get around to my other story later. =)