Date: January 01 2014 8:55 PM Title: strange phenomenon
Can you get down and dirty and make a vaginal/pussy death? I think its time to finish up with all the nonsence and show us your dirty side. :D I love the story by the way. I'm a major book worm (lol) and I don't really mind all the grammar mistakes (who doesn't make them now and then?). But if you really want to do more with this hobby there is work to be done. Anyway, show us what you're really made of. :D
Author's Response:
Sorry to not respond sooner but I have not had internet for the past month. Thank you for your comment and have been considering more ways that I could write "dirty" as they are often the most fun. However I thought I had already shown you some of my "dirty side" with the previous chapter which involved scat. How much dirtier can you get than that? =)
Anyway, I shall be writing more chapters soon and will make sure I include some interesting events.
Date: November 10 2013 4:16 PM Title: strange phenomenon
I still think you should have some of the shrucken people be mistaken for ants and crushed under a bare skin butt of one of the women.
None the less this is one of the best unaware storys i have ever read.
Date: October 27 2013 10:21 PM Title: strange phenomenon
Great job with the last chapters, I love the thought of being eaten and digested by an unaware little girl. From this point on, anything dealing with vore or butts gets my vote! Awesome work!
Author's Response:
my next chapter is actually going to be a toilet scene so i hope you enjoy
Date: October 18 2013 11:23 AM Title: strange phenomenon
Two adults eaten and digested by an unaware little girl at a pool, what a way to go xD
Great job, I love it!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 5:22 PM Title: strange phenomenon
This story has a lot of potential. I'd like to see more of kate and more AV in general. I have a feeling you have a lot more unique deaths so keep the creativity flowing!
Author's Response:
to let out a little spoiler i was actually writing a vore scene for that for my next chapter but i accidently deleted the Tab it was in. now i have to do it from scratch and my mind is refusing to give me the power to do it. losing a whole chapter is depressing.
Date: October 17 2013 8:23 AM Title: strange phenomenon
Digest themmmmm! <3
Author's Response:
=)
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 2:54 AM Title: strange phenomenon
Well uhm yeah sorry if that sounded a bit rude, didnt mean to offend you. The story is still very nice to read and i look forward to read more about it :)
Author's Response:
don't worry. living in australia i don't take many things offensively and i did not think you were being rude either. i do hope that my message did not come across as me being angry or offeded, i was using more of an explanation tone rather than an angry one. i also often use smiley faces to try and show i am talking politely so people don't get confused with how i am speaking. i am very glad you like my story and you give me the want to write more.
oh, and by the way, you forgot the apostrophe in "didn't". =) hehe
Date: September 06 2013 9:52 PM Title: strange phenomenon
Awesome start. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
thankyou. it might be take a little longer than usual for me to pump out ach chapter because i have another story which needs writing and school that needs working. but don't worry, another chapter should be up soon! =)