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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2013 12:40 AM Title: Epilogue

I liked all stories very much. You were very creative in humiliation Dan experienced. E.g. how Steph played with Dan in chapter 5.

The plot was slowly developing and there was a tension what will happen next. I had a feeling that the chapter 10 is just a beginning. I was looking forward to read how Julia would slowly turn Dan into her pet and her sister Leslie would assist. I had a feeling that everything just starts.

But then you wrote last 2 chapters. In my opinion they did not fit to the previous style. I think you just wanted to end - but I do not understand why.

Anyway thanks for great reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue

This was kind of unexpected.

 

Not complaining but it was kind of from left given how nice and reasonable Julia was at first or even Kat a little.

 

Still well done.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 12:13 PM Title: Epilogue

[Original review revised and conjoined with prior one.]

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