Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

Your style reminds me of 'Thomthumb's'.  The excruciatingly slow, but well developed scenes 'play-out' so effortlessly....  Easy to visualize, and each additional event that takes place not only adds to the erotically charged enviroment- It seems to multiply in intensity at the same time!

Dan better start behaving more appropriately around his red-haired princess, she is doing her best to protect him from the outside world...

I think that he'll soon realize that the best way to handle a red-headed giantess is to "Kiss her Ass,...and learn to 'like IT!   ;`)

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

excellent story, I really enjoy how realistic your characters are coming off. The writing is top notch. I meant to comment sooner but your pounding out chapters a torrid pace. Everytime i woudl finish one, you'd have another one for me to read. 

I cant wait to see how you play all this out. The characters of steph and kat are great. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

So endeth the first day. Let's hope his second one is comparatively better (but, I doubt it).