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Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 12:14 PM Title: Epilougue

Very good job in sustaining the central plot twist.  The "hypocrisy" of Nancy's "murder" was nicely lampshaded by Holly's developing conscience.  Perhaps I'm too attached to darker characters, but I tend to agree that Holly needs a more cathartic retribution against Susan.  As Susan herself demonstrates, a high degree of empathy is itself no obstacle to cruelty, and can even amplify it.

I'm not usually one to make suggestions to authors, but I'd love to see Susan try her therapy on some entitled fratboys who think women owe them sex.

 

 

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 11:07 PM Title: Epilougue

God what a great story, would of loved to hear she likes to go back every now and then.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 11:26 AM Title: Epilougue

This was a spectacular story. I just found it and read it. This is a wonderful story, I loved the message it represented as well as how well it was written. Great job. I'm only sorry I didn't read it sooner. Also I loved the details that you went into when Holly was filing Susan's nails and rubbing lotion on her feet. Again great job, I can't wait to see your next story.

aaron

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2013 9:24 PM Title: Epilougue

There is a whole industry of "we can fix your troubled teenager" clinics that would gladly use shrinking technology if it existed, and charge parents an arm and a leg while breaking arms and legs. Great story!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2013 4:38 AM Title: Epilougue

Did you plan out how this was going to end or did you just pull it out of your ass?

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 9:12 PM Title: Epilougue

So, I was right! Figured it had to be a set up, threw me a little when she broke Holly's hand, little extreme but I guess so is shrinking a person! I almost never go for happy endings for the shrinkee but in this case, pretty fitting, how cruel would that have been to eat her after she was a changed person.

Good work.

Reviewer: Ariann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 6:48 PM Title: Epilougue

Loved the story! I'm impressed at how passive Holly turned out to be, however. I would have done more than slap/punch Susan like she did. Truth be told, I would probably go buy a gun and kill her later on.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 2:00 PM Title: Epilougue

So what does Holly call her technical stepdad now?

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 1:59 PM Title: Epilougue

Holy shit, I did not see that coming!


I actually don't know how I feel about this.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 1:54 AM Title: Epilougue

I love Titan and The Shrink Show seems all but dead but this has pretty muxh leapfrogged to my favorite tale this year.

 

Beautiful ending.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 1:11 AM Title: Epilougue

WHOA WHOA WHOA.............

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sizescribe + Happy Ending!?

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 12:23 AM Title: Epilougue

A little abrupt but alright in the end.

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