Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Pivotal Hypocrisy

This a really great story, very well written and laid out. I think I have figured it out now though, I wasn't sure at first if this was the workings of her mother but now I am. I don't believe Nancy was killed, Holly didn't actually see it and the "blood" could have easily been something else, Nancy was a plant to further transform Holly from and uncaring brat to a compasionate caring person. The only thing now is I'm not sure if Susan will want to give up her pet or not when the lesson is over. 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Pivotal Hypocrisy

Still don't understand how she justified killing Nancy, unless Nancy was a murder or rapist herself...