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Reviewer: UnskilledGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god please write more on your second account.

Reviewer: quicksilver6 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

in case anyone still cares, i lost my password and email to that account so i'll be doing a complete re-do on this account.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was a nice ending to the chapter.

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

The story shows promis but I think you need to be more detailed. You need more than just the bare facts of what is happening

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter,

I love these types of stories,

Keep up the good work.

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