Date: September 11 2014 9:41 AM Title: .
You did a good job not making the situation with the girl seem too inappropriate but keep the realism of the interaction while keeping the little girls innocence and curiosity. I know if I did that at her age I would be freaking out. feel like this will be an interesting story and I hope you continue it.
Date: March 05 2014 7:14 PM Title: .
I was hesitant to read this story after I read "7 year old" in the summary. However, now that I read the first chapter I can see why this story is becoming so popular.
You use the thoughts and viewpoints of your characters well. I felt like I understood every action your characters took. Keep up the good work.
Date: March 04 2014 9:29 PM Title: .
Just wanted to tell you I have absolutely LOVED what you have written so far. I have always loved stories where a younger character is in control. (:On another note the story is well written and just great to read. I loved both chapters and I really hope you keep up the good work (more like begging you (; ).
But again good work on the story I am loving it so far and please keep up the wondeful work.
Date: August 10 2013 5:07 AM Title: .
INCREDIBLE! You have to continue this! The suspence and the overwhelming helpless sense of entrapment. What happens Next? The way that youv'e built this up, and cast the main character into such an inescapable perdiciment, and just ending it....
Don't torture us like that, please...
Very masterfully written, and so eliquintly told. You just have to continue