Plan on coming back to this story eventually? I find it to be most enjoyable.

This is gloriously dark. I enjoyed your full commitment in the character interactions to make this one sexily glum affair. I hope you continue to find ways to keep the tone as such, as it's very interesting. I especially like how Milly is so broken that her owner has to resort to measures beyond threats of death to convince her to work; it's a damn unsettling contrast. Nice work here.

Author's Response:

Is it possible to be starstruck by a semi-anonymous internet comment. Probably not but I'm whatever the equivalent would be. I appreciate your comment and I will try hard to continue to keep this tone. The next chapter might be a little lighter with Michelle returning...or maybe not Michelle is kind of a bitch.

Alright, I'm hooked.