Reviewer: womenfood Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream

wonderful story i have ever seen, go on,i can't bear it.:)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Dream

The fact that he has now become this 'inadament object' is a conundrum in itself.  The idea of becoming so small, in fact is quite the tantilizer indeed...

Knowing that it's just a dream, also takes away from it.  Although, you are experimenting with this, right?

The bathroom shower scene was great!  But, she still doesn't see him as a person, which, for me... is another take away.

Maybe if she actually, kissed the necklace, or squeezed it so tightly, that he popped out of it, and was permenently stuck at this tiny size.  She discovers him, and captures him up between her fingers and....

I don't know?  Ha!  Just asuggestion...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think you'll find his dreams becoming more and more vivid, to the point of almost seeming real... Unfortunately, there can be no tiny man. The story is of him becoming the necklace. However, I welcome your suggestions; I may be able to work something out.