Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Procedures

Intense, and hopelessly subjective.  This is very realistically disturbing, and quite erotic in the way that Elizabeth is only slightly concerned for her tiny subjects,  and the way that her understudy 'Pretends to be' thoughtfully, performing her duties in caring for the miniature people, and as Myra is left alone with them, her personality switches back to the cruel giant goddess that tortures them for her own pleasure.....

The hospital setting has a very attractive element about it, (for this particular tale) I don't know why though, must be something subconscous about the way that you discribed it....

I can't wait to see if any of them can manage to escape from Myra!