Date: April 25 2014 5:19 PM Title: Prologue
Wow! You've certainly took writing stories to a whole new level now. I'm truly impressed, well done!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed this Ifcfan. As one of my best supporter it means a lot to hear you say that.
I guess I have to to something even crazier to top this. maybe I'll do hand-drawn illustrations?
[Report This]Date: April 19 2014 8:09 PM Title: Prologue
Your right about this being a good chapter! I was casually reading to keep up with this story and my hype for this shot through the roof with this one! Good job, I'll be looking forward to what you have planned.
Author's Response:
Thank god for this review. I was nervous that my new approach to the story would fail, but thanks to you I'm confident about it.
Date: April 06 2014 12:59 AM Title: Prologue
An update! Seems like Michael will become an interesting hurdle in Nephilias path to greatness. Getting attached to people is the quickest way to make yourself vulnerable, so this development is certainly welcomed.
Author's Response:
More like Nephilia will be hurdle in Michaels path to greatness. Its easy to lose sight of your goals when there is a multi-ton women constantly glaring at you out of the corner of her eye.
Its interesting that you say that since in my opinion Nephilia is already vulnerable. However, chances are she will become even more so as time passes.
Date: April 05 2014 3:29 PM Title: Prologue
I like the story so far. Not sure what you ment by "the attention span of a rodent" though, because I find all rodents to be very inquisitive and they are often very determined animals. Presumably you meant not long attention span if there's no giantess content?
As for your other comment, this story looks to be one with a well thought out plot and lots of character development so it'll be iteresting ose how you'll include sex in this story and keep believable. If there is a love interest for a character then surely can't come from that race of giants (who first impressions imply are very brutish).
It'll also be interesting to find out why Michael was sent there. I can guess but I'll keep my thoughts to myself for now. I'm a bit confused about certain details though but I'm reviewing this chapter on my mobile phone and read a bit fast so I think a reread is in order when I get onto my main computer. Hopefully that will clear things up, and not I'll leave some more comments for you.
Author's Response:
That bit in the beginning was a mini-rant against short-sighted readers who get bored too quickly. I never realized how determined rodents were though, thats good to know.
This is giantessworld.com, so yes, there will be some intense interaction with the giants and giantesses. However, unlike my more... pornegraphic works, in this one I don't intend to go into explicit details. At least not excessively. I'm not sure where I'm going to draw the line in this one.
Also, not all the giants are brutish as you will soon come to see.
Date: April 05 2014 2:35 PM Title: Prologue
Sweet, I'm glad you updated!
Author's Response:
And I'm glad you enjoyed my story enough to review. Thanks again Gadget. :D
Date: December 08 2013 2:18 AM Title: Prologue
Nice addition, the beginnings of her change in character I guess! Hopefully we'll get to see more plot in the future chapters though, to keep it more interesting. :)
Also, you've been using IE until now? What century have you been living on? lol!
Author's Response:
Thank you Ifcfan. Its good to hear from you again.
And yes, Nephilia will be going through some behavioral changes in repsonse to these recent events.
As for my browser choice... apparently I have been living in the same century this story takes place it because IE sucks.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 10:17 AM Title: Prologue
I have something of an interest in mythology, and I'd like to know what mythologies and other sources you're drawing on here. I see what looks like Greek and Sumerian mythology, ancient astronauts stuff, Biblical stuff and 19th/20th century versions of the Atlantis story.
Author's Response:
You have quite an eye for these things Ancient Relic! then again, with a name like that I would expect nothing less.
As for all the sources, here is a list of all I can give you without spoiling future parts of the story.
- First off, Nephila's name... well, that one is a bit obvious.
- Michael's name comes from the archangel who shares the same name, and the Atlantian Military is based on both the Christian and Jewish Angelic Hirarchies.
- The war mentioned in the beginning of the story is derived from christian apocrypha Specifically the book of Enoch. And the un-named leader of the rebellion that Michael killed was based off of Lucifer.
- The idea od Atlantis being an advanced spacefaring civilization I got from a book, which I cannot for the life of me remember the name of. (sry)
- lastly Seraphim Yesod's name comes from the Jewish Sephirot.
You were spot on in your analyisis on my story, and I hope you keep on reading so that I can repy to you again when I have more written.
Date: October 08 2013 6:02 AM Title: Prologue
And another Greek god enters the scene! I'm liking this a lot :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read Ifcfan.
The best part of using greek gods as characters is that I can utilize the various myths and legends about them to help develop their characters personalities.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2013 9:11 PM Title: Prologue
Well done, you do a good job of crafting vivid scenes and you've got an unusual premise here which is interesting. Interested to see where this is going.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading QMajor.
I like to think that what makes a giantess story truly good is its details, and your review has re-assured me that I am doing a good job.
Date: October 05 2013 7:26 PM Title: Prologue
This story has been one of my "go-tos" for a while and it seems to be progressing along nicely. It was nice character development for Nephy to have evil thoughts about what she could to to her tiny partner. Im glad shes come to like Micheal enough to let go of such thoughts and even condemn herself for having them.
Glad I decided to check the latest today! Hope you continue to push forward with this story.
Author's Response:
Glad you've enjoyed reading it as much as I have writing it Gadgetma.
And I intend to push this story far, and maybe even expand further into this little universe I have created with a side story or something.
See you next time. :D
[Report This]Date: September 15 2013 8:01 AM Title: Prologue
Great story AW! I don't know why I missed this earlier. It has great writing, pace and charcater development, just the things you need for an adventure story. And of course, you made me want to know what happens next!
But I do have some questions which I hope you'll clarify to me. You mentioned primitive humans on Earth's landmasses, while Atlantis is there too. Does this mean that there are two human races there?
If so, considering that the Atlantians are near immortal and that the story is set in the past, does this mean that the characters like Athena are actually the gods from Greek mythology?
And judging by the title, I kind of see where this is heading for. :D
Author's Response:
Thank you Ifcfan I am pleased to hear that you enjoyed it. Especially since you are very accomplished in terms of Sci-fi giantess stories.
Regarding the questions.
1) I would say yes. Since the story takes place 37,000 years ago during the last Ice age, so if my knowledge of pre-history is accurate than there should be some Neanderthals living in what will eventually become Europe. As far as the story goes I can say that I never really considered that angle and figured everyone would just assume them to be modern humans.
2)I cannot spoil the ending, but considering Athena is named after a greek goddess and Michael is named after a biblical angel I will simply tell you that your head is in the right place.
Once again thank you for reading my story I hope to hear from you again. :)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2013 8:45 PM Title: Prologue
Legitsause, this story is actually very interesting, Im not sure why I hadn't noticed it sooner. The whole 'role-reverse' thing with giants is quite clever and lends itself well to this story. The attempted rape of the newest chapter as well as the woman's attitude really gave perspective into the type of world your building here, keep it up, Im loving it so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing Gadget.
Personally I believe this story is more of a roll-equalizing story than a complete roll-reversal story, since the giants can easily slay their masters if they get them in the right position. However they can't since then the giants would have nowhere to go and nobody to care for them.
Date: July 26 2013 8:29 PM Title: Prologue
Great intro chapter, at this point it's anyone's guess at to how the GTS will be, so I'll hold my score off till I get a better sense of what's going on in this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review gadgetmawombo I understand your hesitation to give this a good story, and I hope that the next chapter will make you fall in love with it
[Report This]Date: July 26 2013 6:52 PM Title: Prologue
Upon first few sentences, I was easily confused, that was until the dialogue presented itself. I became entranced into the story to learn more about this universe, I didn't even care when it came to the Giantess, I wanted to know more. It's good to see a story that actually contains story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review Micro72. It is quite a difficult idea to take in entirely at first, I am glad that the dialogue made it easier.
anyways you will not be disappointed as I plan to expand this universe a lot, and maybe if this story does well enough i'll open it up for other authors to make side stories.