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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

Attack of the 100 Foot Baton Twirlers,

And a Silver Cyclone who's probably no relation to the Red Tornado or the Hanna-Barbera 1978 knock-off Scarlet Cyclone (aka Retired Man in Legends of the Super-Heroes).

And Star City.

DC or not DC, that is the question, facetiously of course.

Author's Response: I knew you'd interpret it that way! ;-) Well, believe it or not, that's the actual Russian language designation for the urban complex surrounding the Yuri Gugarin Space Center (Russia's version of Cape Kennedy/Canaveral).

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw, Poor Steve, shrunk down to a mere '6" tall and held captive by a team of gorgious majorettes?  What else could possible go wrong?  What could they do to him as a tiny 'Pet', make a mascot out of him... naw, I'll bet they've got some devious ideas that could possibly give him a 'New' perspective toward their physical fit-acrobatic dance craft.... 

Maybe, a little part in the 'Performance'....Yeah!  ;`)

Author's Response: What are you? A psychotronic mind-reader? ;-D

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