Date: January 02 2014 9:39 PM Title: Bradley's Last Stand
Great story! Love to read more of your works!
Date: September 10 2013 9:08 PM Title: Bradley's Last Stand
So in all actually Arellano was just another fucked up human...good this shows that all sentient life host the same seven deadly sins. Lust, gluttony Greed, sloth, wrath, envy, pride. it may had taked some infulence on our part but Arell shows some of these sins.
I feel that your story should act as a sort of template for anyone who wants to make a giant alien race as the background to their giantess cause even if they act superior, morally the are not and anyone who thinks up a sentient race that's socity is some sort of utopia need to relize such a thing does not exist
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I'm glad you think I did that well! It's more credit that I gave myself! :)
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 5:11 PM Title: Bradley's Last Stand
I liked the ending, It felt rushed indeed but It was a satisfying ending for me. n.n Do you have plans for a continuation?
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 3:26 PM Title: Bradley's Last Stand
OK story but ending felt rushed and ended up sending a very narrow misanthropic message.
Author's Response:
The ending did sound better in my head than it ended up, I will admit. Didn't come out as good as hoped, but Im still pleased with it. Thanks for reading! :D