Date: September 10 2013 12:29 PM Title: The Ultimatum and War
Wow the intensity, and Bradley came back.
Nice cliffhanger I really want to know what's going to happen.
Can what for for the next chapter.
Date: September 10 2013 9:51 AM Title: The Ultimatum and War
Dude I love this stark fellow he's got some real balls hope you keep him around for a while more
Date: September 10 2013 3:45 AM Title: The Ultimatum and War
Felt the need to reply to your question even if it wasn't a real question to: isn't that the entire point of the antagonist?
Yes it is but there is only so much i can take from a antagonist in a story. Not saying you are doing a bad job on her. Just saying she is little bit much for me to handle and not get irritated when reading her parts in the story.
She is not really acring any better than us by taking people from Earth and playing with them and at times flat out killing them. She says we are inferior race to her race but in the end she is still just a human also, just another kind of human.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 2:55 AM Title: The Ultimatum and War
Damm Arell is getting more irritating to listion to. I didn't like her from the very start. Yes she is a alien and has very advanced technology, so i can understand what she can do with it.
Next time she opens her mouth to talk, they should shoot a nuck down her throat with an unmanned drone , thats it no more craze alien bitch.
She said her race was just like us, what ever can kill us can most likely kill her also, just needs more of it due to her size. Not that hard to gas her in her mouth.
Colonel Stark if he has a arm free and a grenade he should throw it into her mouth, it wont most likely to kill her but it should be enough for a little bit of damage to her again.
I don't like Arell but the story is entertaining enough for me to keep checking for updates on it and to keep reading it.
I will look forward to the next update hopefully sometime soon.
Bit of a low rating only due to Arell seeming to win because of her size and technology and that they really haven't delt her a big enough blow yet.
Author's Response:
I feel as if I should be proud that Arell is irritating you, for isn't that the entire point of the antagonist? =P