Reviews For Dark Guardian
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Reviewer: loreanb5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great so far. Keep going ! move up to X rated between Jessica and Tobias.Let's find out Jessica Bi.Have  Jessica and Tobias bring in many trust worth female and male tiny vampires.give the small amount each needs.Jessica could safely lead a support a  fair size group by herself.

 

  A good follow on story would be after Jessica got her own place.It could be safe house for a ever larger group of trust worthy  vampires male and female working  for her and tobias to  get the income to support  the safehouse and more

Reviewer: IDrawThings Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love the story. keep writing!

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