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Reviewer: contender955 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 1:15 PM Title: Adjusting

abusive

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 1:17 AM Title: Adjusting

Playful

Excellent addition. I hope she stays playful for a good long while.

Reviewer: Zingem Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 3:00 PM Title: Adjusting

Playful, but more naughty if you would :)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 2:33 PM Title: Adjusting

This is really good, I like what you've done so far, and I don't think that I'll vote.  Your idea's will ultimately be the best ones, and I can't wait to see what happens next in this fantasy.  Just take it 'SLOWLY', and allow the 'fear', and 'suspence' , to build-up as he realizes his new place in this gigantic new world....

Take your time,  ;`)

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 11:01 AM Title: Adjusting

abusive

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 8:45 AM Title: Adjusting

Please be playful all around I can find abusive anyware.  Some insertion and breast themes would be nice, like he would be more confortable if he lived in her vagina than in a sock at night, or under her foot when she walks, this way her pheromones can seduce him into likeing his situation.  I always when the tinies literaly live inside the women relying on their natural chemicals, "like cum and brest milk for nurishment".

Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 4:19 AM Title: Adjusting

Great footplay. I found it strange that he didn't noticed her fingering herself. If he would be aware of her masturbating that might have filled his head with even more weird feelings... to know his mother was THAT sexual aroused, that he was not alone with these "wrong" feelings.

 

my vote: PLAYFUL

And maybe a suggestion: not going for the hardcore stuff right away. Body exploration of her soft stomach and breasts. (breasts still in the bra.)



Author's Response: His vision was kind of blocked by a huge toe and so was his attention. Yeah, it's hard to notice things like that when something like that distracts you.

Reviewer: ogilthorpe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 4:03 AM Title: Adjusting

playful or abusive?

 

Uhhh...   both



Author's Response: It can be done...

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 2:27 AM Title: Adjusting

Playful.
But if it's insertion then cruel.

aaron
PS great chapter btw.

Author's Response: Can do!

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