Date: May 24 2014 1:14 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY
Date: August 05 2013 6:54 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
Abusive but with conflict and guilt at the end
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 1:09 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Well i like the approach of her starting playful and her also having doubts and limitations about using him, but at the same time having this voice in the back of her head which wants her to really abuse him with no limit.
So for now i would also go with playful, but leaning more to abusive already than in the previous chapter.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2013 6:49 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Another vote for gentle!
I've been thinking about it, if you make her a cruel giantess... a goddess dominating, humiliating, torturing her "slave", then it diminishes incestual aspect.
Incest is only kinky if it is with consent of the two people, otherwise it is just plain rape IMO.
Keep it focussed on a maternal gentle relationship. This doesn't mean that there can't some cruelty... in fact it would make those rare acts of cruelty all the more interesting if afterward:
"Mom... WHY WHY WHY did you do that to me?"
Make her sometimes lose her self control, and let her sane self deal with the messy situations that have occured.
I am not judging people for preferring cruel giantesses, but come on, there are already so many stories like that. And we barely have gentle giantesses.
(This also goes for foot fetsish. :D Already enough stories about.)
And this was a really great start to the story. Great set up.
I rate only 4 stars.
You want an extra star? CONTINUE THIS!
;) :D
Author's Response:
Continue I will. And forget 'cruel' I gotta go rewrite that. Think more...
Abusive or Playful.
not Gentle or Cruel.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 2:38 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
I personally think the best way to approach this story would be to have Lauren purposely create situations where she "accidentally" does things to Andrew. For example she could pretend she doesnt see him and then step on him etc. As the story progresses and she becomes more and more comfortable with treating her son as a toy, thats went she becomes more aggressive towards him. The problem you have at the moment is that youve made her too overprotective and to just make her switch to a violent character wouldnt be believable in my opinion. At the moment its a very interesting story though and I will be looking forward to updates.
Author's Response:
Exactly! Someone gets it! That's what I've been trying to communicate! Now you are right in the too overprotective fact, but I've got that _mostly_ worked out to be fixed.
Thanks for an insightful review!
Date: July 11 2013 9:25 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
I'd prefer if Lauren went wild with her sexual instinct and dominated her son, especially if her son was aroused against his will and she teased him about it while still being rough with him.
I'd also enjoy if there were gentle chapters later on where she explains and somewhat regrets her actions and they maybe come to an agreement and play around some more.
I think the first scenario is more arousing but the second is also hot and makes the story more bearable for scared masochists like myself who dislike when the larger party is cruel all the way to the end of a story.
I'm interested in incest stories so whatever you go with I'll be reading it.
Author's Response:
I'll see about that. Thanks for your input it will be considered and probably used. Really, all this is influencing the ending and as the chapters go on, I'll make sure to have the story drop a hint on what the next chapter will be so all you readers can ponder what you would prefer. Also, it's really a majority vote so if I get more cruel recommendations than gentle I'll make the next one cruel. But also it IS possible to do what you said and maybe mix it up with regret and stuff. It all depends on how you want the scenario to play out.
Date: July 11 2013 1:36 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
I'd prefer seeing gentle with some humiliation thrown in. That's just me, can't wait to see what you've come up with. Could she make him paint her toenIls or rub her feet?
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 10:32 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Love the idea and can't wait to see what happens next. Hope it's foot related.
aaron
Author's Response:
Stuff will happen but which way would you prefer it?
Gentle or Violent?
Either way I'm up for it
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 4:10 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Great chapter, I hope she goes against he motherly instincts and use him. Just what I would do. Cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 12:29 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
gentle way. Definitely gentle way