[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Forces of nature
Great chapter. But now I'm wondering why Samantha was giggling? Has she lost it or is she in on the whole thing? I can't wait to see what happens next or what happens when he gets tiny.
aaron
PS will there be a full sized woman who's a friend of April maybe who joins in on the fun? Anyways great story I'm really liking it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and anything is a possibility, stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Forces of nature
I can only give a 10 out of 10 rating. System doesn't allow me to put in a 16.8223 out of 10. Don't worry this is all scientific.
It's weird to review a story that is not finished yet, I don't know what the plot and the finale is going to be like. But up until now, chapter 1 to 6, what a start.
Most us readers (if not all) agree that your writing skill is top notch. The way you manipulate the reader, making me curious and the build up of suspense. Amazing character development, perfect pacing. It's like... well, maybe I think it is: a psychological thriller. I like psychologival thrillers... and exciting action scenes. This story delivers both weaven toghether.
The content (up til now) might not really be my cup of tea...and there are many stories like this where a girl tortures her tiny captives. But this is raising the bar.
I will definately keep following this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support, I am so glad that you can look passed your own niche and enjoy my writing.