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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would say that Mike gets the reward for making a ridiculous assumption and screwing up not just his own life but his girlfriends as well.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would've voted for Al. He kept getting his own gender confused!

"He became so wrapped up in his speech that _she_ (sic) never heard [Courtney Mack] come up behind him."

Author's Response:

Can't believe I didn't notice that. It's fixed now.

Reviewer: Vinny Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Also, I'd like to say thanks for adding a new story! It may not actually be new, but if it has just been submitted then it's new to this site.

Reviewer: Vinny Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm...so Darlene is against birthdays all because they remind her that she's getting older? Is she aware of the fact that GTS-Goddesses don't age?

Author's Response:

Good question. Darlene isn't aware of the fact she ageless. But as more and more time passes it will become clear to her.

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