Date: December 01 2018 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Cool continuation. Little timmy has a new life with the new gang of little men. A Twinkie is a great prize. I have not had one in a long time. I'd have left the boy behind also. Too much risk of being caught. I was wondering if the Mother would come home and catch some of them. I like the birdcage as a home. Great for the Giantess perspective. I'm sure she still looks down on him.
I also wonder if Wendy or Shiela eventually recapture timmy or some of the other little men. I know spoilers.
Great to see this continue,
These things that you have just metioned I have consdiered suffice it to say... That's the thing about writing a story.. You have to think of everything!
Suffice it to say that I would not have restarted this story if I did not have a direction or outcome in mind.. That had me stumped for a while but now I know how to move towards it and not lose th forest for the trees.
I'm going full steam ahead on this now and am glad that you are on board!
Thanks a lot Diesel. :)
Date: November 30 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Nice to see this story updated again, been a fan since the start, just never reviewed it until now. I feel Tim's agony as he tries to maintain a fleeting grip on his manhood and control of his life in a world where he is a tiny being in a land of giants. I do have to wonder if Tim will ever miss home and attempt to return to it in future chapters.
All of these things that you are thinking I am thinking too. So there's a hint in there somewhere Nodqfan. :)
The story's focus is not to meander off into the chaos of some dark cliff, but to have a meaning and a ending that makes sense.. Therfore lots of things have to happen.
It's my hope that you will be there for it too Nodqfan!
Thanks a lot for commenting as the comments are always appreciated!