Date: March 25 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
By the way the entire scene of when the girls were searching for Tim was great. It's easy to imagine the fear of when Shiela says, I think he's over here Wendy. Scary.
Also love when he stabs her to gain freedom and it only lasts a second as Shiela just grabs him with her other hand.
Yeah I imagine the tiny little pin prick isn't going to stop a determined Giant for long! And I'm glad that you were able to catch the fear that would set in when such a massive person decides to chase you down. He, he.
Thanks again Diesel!!!!
Date: March 24 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Very cool. I am shocked that Tim could get away. The tunnels are amazing. To have them marked and everything. Wow, what a concept. The poor guy caught by Shiela. He is in for some tough times. Will Wendy be questioning him? Will she torture him to get what she wants? What am amazing world.
These are all very good questions and deserve diirect attention in subsequent chapters Diesel. :)
Thanks a lot for another wonderful review my friend!
Date: March 23 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Smart hiding place. Good hard lesson for Tim. Someone gave him freedom. Time to repay that by learning valuable skills and learning that group some skills. If they could somehow poison their spears and use fire/napalm. This whole process of learning to survive in a very hostile world is going to be interesting. Hope they're ready for a certain someone.
Yes, you see the development that is ahead. I suppose I'll lose a lot of readers with the next few chapters as it won't be what many are probably looking for but development is essential to a good story I feel and am glad that at least one reader like yourself Barrowman, get's it.
Date: March 23 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! It'll be interesting to see how Tim does in this society of tiny people!
I'm glad you liked this chapter.. This story is intended to go all over the place and not be limited to a bedroom. So be prepared for a lot of twists and turns. :)