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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Very interesting development. The fight for freedom continues.
Love this story. I hope Tim succeeds in his quest. The best way to punish someone is to let them suffer with doubt of not knowing you are alive or dead for a long time. That they never hear from you again. His mom deserves that kind of pain. I would deliver it. Now break that suit in pieces and burn it.



Author's Response:

I agree with you about being missing is worse than being dead.  With a death at leat you know.  Tim's going to have problems of his own soon enough but he will have to toughen up a bit if he's going to survive in this new world that he finds himself in.   And yes, some things will have to be dispersed with. The sooner the better. :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

Enjoyed this chapter as well. Sheila handles him well. Love when she talks about him like he is not there. Like a pet or an object.
So who are the new men and how do they fit in? I can hardly wait to see where this goes.
Why doesn't Wendy just use her device to catch him? He can't be 5 miles away.
Love it, love Wendy,

Author's Response:

If you re-read the end of the chapter when she get's off the phone, she goes back to the house to get the locating device delegating Sheila to search for him in the meantime.

As to who the guys are.. I've already spoiled that surprise if you look at my response to Carycomic. ;)

I'm glad that you liked this chapter as well.. Not all of them are going to be so GTS intensive as I wanted to give the story a bit more background development so that it isn't smothered or one dimensional in GTS.. But please hang in there while that happens Diesel!

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