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Date: January 25 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

Overpowering him unawarely with the smell of her feet and all this by a younger girl? This humiliation is turning me on beyond my imagination..

I'm following this story with big expectations. Thanks for this really.

Author's Response:

Well, I hope I don't let you down The Reviewer in that case.   More on the way very soon. :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love the collar. What is the LPGO device that is coming? Sharon is great. Love the flick of the behind. I would love to see a chapter of her capturing little people. Does she use a net or a box trap. Great writing, love the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Diesel.. I'm sure all will be revealed in good time. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

It would be good if the small people eventually set a trap for Sharon and put her on fire and is left severly handicapped with third degree burns. That character doesn't deserve better. She is like Damon Killian from "The Running Man". ;)

The extra creepy part is put in to play for Tim. ;) Wendy, isn't Wendy anymore but a government tool from the moment that toolkit for shrunken people came into play. Trainend and conditioned to think like the governments in our real lifes. Wanting total control over you and dehumanize you as much as possible. This is the point where Wendy also becomes a victim of the dehumanizing process. Now we can see how strong or weak Tim and/or Wendy are.

Good detail of what's developing, crocodile. Your chapters are good. Not lingering too long on the fetish, but on the drama and stress that are developing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the words Barrowman. I'm glad that it's giving you some anger. The best stories always seem to anger their readers in some way. :)

Personally I try to never make a fetish story. That's pretty much a one dimensional ploy that doesn't ever lead anywhere. And get's boring in a fraction of that time. Those kind of stories dd have their place and time howerver.. I'm just not in to them anymore or have been for going on decades now.

I think if the person approaches things from the attitude of "I'm expressing myself artistically and I plan on writing a story that just so happens to have an altered size ratio theme to boot, then the chips may fall randomly and make for much more entertainment for the reader and writer alike.

Thanks again Barrowman!

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