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Reviewer: Miszczu21PL Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 25 2018 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

OK. Woah, I don't have words. Such 7/10

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter.The orange suit idea is logical. It will lead to his safety. Will he see the light or will his anger get the best of him. Very realistic idea. Being small for Wendy would be nice.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the idea of the fluorescent colors all in the spirit of keeping those afflicted from possibly getting underfoot. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

Good story. If Tim plays it smart. He can get out of this. If I was betrayed in that manner, it would be all out mental warfare. He has nothing to lose now. Even death is better than this. There are so many tactics he could use and they would all work if he is committed enough and smart enough. But he doesn't seem smart enough because he was surprised that that suit was a trap. He's doomed. ;)



Author's Response:

When we win some and we lose some too... It's when we win that's most important if feel. :)

Thank you for the inspirational review Barrowman.  I think you might like where this is heading in the long run so please stick it out with me. ;)

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