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Reviewer: Miszczu21PL Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2018 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

Cool. But there's practically no action.

By the way, I want to see them playing with each other

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

This story seems incomplete.

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

I hope some day this keeps going because it's really an amazing story and really well written.

Reviewer: Snowball Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

Credit where credit is due!! This was an excellent chapter; I thought it might be helpful for us readers to know what was in Tim’s mother’s letter, thank you for including it. Perhaps Wendy might end up being the friend Tim needs rather than the monster she was in the last chapter. If she is reasonable Tim will not have to use the nuclear option that he now knows he has. If Tim is forced to use his intelligence Wendy cannot win. History has taught us brute force never succeeds for long. Sun Tzu wrote at length about how these battles are won and lost. His mother has obviously adopted Machiavelli’s The Prince Strategy of over reach and sacrifice with Wendy as an instrument of overreach to achieve her goal. By using Wendy to make draconian demands on Tim, the fundamental plan would be to metaphorically behead Wendy to receive voluntary concessions from Tim. Hopefully Wendy will not fall into this trap and might navigate a new course that will improve Tim's life. If Wendy can act as an impartial arbitor your story can take some unexpected twists and my make this tale fascinating on a level that transcends masterbatory fantasy.


Tim should be encouraged to matriculate in on-line classes and to prepare himself for an adult life.  Wendy could guide him in this endeavour, and can be persuaded to be reasonable with him.  His mother has a history of selfishly blaming Tim for her failed marriage and does not have his best interests actually at heart, while she indulges his laziness and self-pity.  Their relationship is long-standing unhealthy.  If Wendy could grow up to be a real girlfriend, growing into a helpmeet, she could educate herself to actually be of service to little people and love him completely as well.  This could indeed be a true fairy tale romance.

Keep up the good work!


Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

Nice choice. But for me it's the '68 impala.(definitely not in cherry condition lol but I'm getting it there)
Anyways great chapter and I completely understand on the delay, hell I've been meaning to update my story for 5 months. Life finds a way.


Author's Response:

I love the Impalas too and the Galaxies for that matter.   The reason why I bought this Nova (outside of always wanting a 62 or 63) was because all of the body work was done... No bondo, no sanding, no painting.. Done! 

And like the late Williamn Burroughs said:  "Hmmm, never try to write when your not in the mood, yes."

So, I understand your need not to push things. ;)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa!  A 63' - 'cherry condition'-  Chevy Nova? / 

Wendy is turning out to be a great giantess,  can't wait to see her turn a little playful, and get carried away with herself...  :`)

Author's Response:

Yep, Just about all of it is original too.  The tires are magged out though and a lot fatter than the factory ones were but you can't skimp out on the tires I'm afraid. The floor plates were replaced due to rust but that's to be expected due to the salting of roads during winter months.  My wife wanted to know where the air conditioner was and I pointed her to the fan knob...  So yeah, if you want some luke warm air pushed through the vents then that's the air conditioning you'd better be ready for in that old lady. Ha, ha, ha.

And yeah, Wendy is a monster and doesn't even know it yet so you might be pleased with what's coming down the pike.. Thanks a lot for the words Wildcatman.. I'll be reading your newest chapter tonight as well and can't wait to see what you came up with here lately.

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