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Reviewer: Miszczu21PL Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2018 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

It wasn't nice. I still have hope they may will like each other. Would be cool. 


Reviewer: pasret4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Uh-oh, looks like Tim's plan did not work, and now he is reallly testing the patience of a kind girl who does not let anyone push her around.

I like where this story is going, keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more!!

Author's Response:

I'll try to do just that Pasret4.. I left some reasons for the delay on this chapter in the beginning notes of chapter6, so hope you will understand. :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Read the last few chapters an I must say that I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.


Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Aaron!  I think you'll like what's coming down the pike and thanks again for nice words. :)

I'm working on the next chapter as I type this, literally. ;)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh Timmy, you dirty little rat.....Wendy might have to pee, and the thought of a steaming hot', 'golden shower' created by an enormous teen giantess would be more then enough to break him of that disgusting little act of rebellion,  you would 'think' (anyway?) ...Maybe Not though ;`) 

Another intense addition!   If I were Tim, I might just have to see how much this giant girl would contend with......

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the comments Wildcatman. :)

I realize that this first encounter had a very abrupt ending but I wanted their first true encounter to be a shocking one for Tim.. Like a cold blast of water to the face or a warm one in this case.   After all, Wendy can pretty much do anything she wants as he's going to find this out sooner rather than later that way the pace can start moving along for other things that I want to do with this story.

This chapter was kind of like a farewell to the setup and now we're off to the action type of transition.. Or at least that's what I was hoping to do.

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