Date: August 02 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
I haven't written a review before, but I just felt like saying how much I love this story as a whole. The premise feels different from anything else I've read. Kim is such a wild card, it's kind of a rollercoaster. Puts a spin on the "gentle" giantess. And the writing is just great. I don't know much about writing myself, but the way some of the perspectives are written really absorbs me into the scene. Like Don's panic attack. I've had panic attacks before, and your writing just portayed it perfectly in my mind.
This is probably my favorite story on this site (including titan) and I just wanted to say thanks for sharing it here!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it really gets my excited to write when people leave comments like these!
Date: July 31 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another fantastic chapter :D. I hope Kim isnt too upset.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And yeah Kim is pretty upset right now, but she'll bounce back!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow, Kim is upset but I don't blame Don for acting this way, he'll need time before he can ever trust a Lyrian. Tommy's been in her bra for a long time now hasn't he?
Author's Response:
Yeah Kim is upset, but she's kind of a moody girl and she knows it. And Tommy hasn't been there that long, all these past couple of chapters have taken place withing the span of a couple of hours...He's been in there like 4-5 hours tops.