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Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Im looking forward to future updates this is a story i really like.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, its a big motivator. I posted chapter 19 shortly after you typed this.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

This chapter seemed to go on forever. Anyway, I did spot two mistakes.

Here:

You can keep you man-pet then!,” Phil yelled, “We'll go!”

You mean: your

Here:

“Aww, come on Tommy, don't be made at me, pretty pleeeeasse?”

You mean: mad



Author's Response:

Yeah it was pretty long, I prolly should have split it into two parts. Thanks for the error check.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

 Yep, you are definitely on a roll, Kim is definitely a giggling landscape! I am curious to see how you handle the human colony, how will they react to being told that a Lyrian is at the gates? Like a city under siege?



Author's Response:

I still havent planned out the colony chapter but suffice to say they will react poorly!

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