Date: May 30 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ah, cool, this story is back. I don't know if I should re-read to get refresh my memory but I think I should be ok. The line spacing is annoying though.
Author's Response:
What do you think I should do about the formatting? I think it's been like this since a while back and you seemed to be okay with it. I remember when I first started this story my format was different but someone told me it was hard to read so I changed it to this one.
Date: May 29 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow Kim really took this hard and it must taoe a lot of restraint on her part not to kill that boy. Now the alarms been sounded since the humans know that she's here, I am guessing everyone will run or less likely, fight her.
Also, will you ever explain why Kim is so different from the other Lyrians?
Author's Response:
I'll to to Kims origins sometime, I'm saving it for later in the story.