Date: February 28 2020 10:53 PM Title: Bios
Geeman
This was an absolutely great story. It's a shame that it hasn't been updated in awhile. You should continue your writing style however. Whether it's in this community or in an other medium. I truly enjoyed the plot more than some other writers may have but it would be a shame to see you stop writing all together.
Respectfully,
Mrblack01
Date: August 12 2019 1:59 AM Title: Bios
It is a shame that this story has not been updated in five years. It was good.
Date: July 31 2017 3:43 AM Title: Bios
Aaaaaaaaaaaand I just saw that was last edited in 2014 <.<
Too bad, was a great story !
Date: July 31 2017 2:24 AM Title: Bios
I created an account just to review on this, it must be one of the greatest story I've ever read on this this, keep up the good work :p
Date: July 06 2014 11:18 PM Title: Bios
Great story one of the best I have read on this site! Looking forward to more updates and Kim's blossoming relationship with Tommy( hopefully we will see more steamy action)!
Author's Response:
The steamy action is coming!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2014 5:55 AM Title: Bios
What about the other myth of the vampire? That you can become a vampire by drinking their blood. Maybe Tina's wish could partially come true. Maybe drinking Kim's fluids (milk, blood) would turn you into what she is? For men it would just be fast healing, good health, and longer life, but for women, the full load, plus increased size. Not Lyrian size, but still bigger. If they can get past the blood lust, the humans may have a better chance at survival with several giant super women among them. Just some thoughts I had while reading your latest chapter and seeing Tina's thoughts. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
These are all great ideas/speculation. I wont say that I AM gonna have other vamps but I wont deny it either XP.
Date: June 03 2014 4:57 AM Title: Bios
Haven't read the chapter yet, will do so later, but dude, really sexy drawing! You've inspired me to try my hand at it too! :D
(I will suck though, bad. I have absolutely no talent for it hehe.)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I wouldn't mins giving input on your drawings if you want.
Date: May 31 2014 7:19 AM Title: Bios
Nice to see you update this again, Gadget! And yeah, the pics are an interesting touch and something I've been wanting to do myself too, but I just don't have the talent for drawing, or at least I don't have the level I would like to have, hehe.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, the drawing do add to it in my opinion. And I had fun drawing them so yeah!
Date: May 31 2014 2:32 AM Title: Bios
I'm not too bothered about the line spacing, even if I did take the time to mention it. One idea I have is saving it to a different file type. Also, Giantess World, next to the HTML button, has a button for pasting text from Microsoft Word. Note the Microsoft Word logo. I've never had a problem with excessive line spacing it seems so I've not tried using that button.
Also for my profile there's HTML I did using the PRE tags. Pre us short for pre-fotmatting and if you copy your chapter into the HTML editor and use said tags it should keep original formatting. Do this if the stuff from the previous paragraph fails.
Author's Response:
I'll try doing that then, see how people like the new format in the next chapter...It wont be a huge difference but the line spacing will be less.
Date: February 15 2014 4:14 AM Title: Bios
Kim? A superhero to humans? Well that is a surprise but it is good to see her doing good to help them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, its kind of funny but she seems to think so, in some way at least. Of course, nobody needs to know that...
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 9:52 PM Title: Bios
Wow, what a turn of events! I so glad that little Ron didn't get it! whew...
Nice chapter Gadget!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Ron's a little warrior, it'd be a shame if he was killed...
[Report This]Date: January 28 2014 8:06 AM Title: Bios
When I said the drawings were 'formidable' to the story, what I meant was just that whenever there is no pictures in a story, the reader is left to imagine what the characters actually look like.
Which might be very different from what the author is trying to portray, and each individual reader will proably have a slightly different image inside their mind!
However, when you add pictures, or drawings, that instantly forces the viewer to procieve that exact image, hence- Very 'Formidable' to the story...
Also, with the extreme size difference you've got here, that really helps out the story!
More drawings could save a lot of repetitive discriptions and a hell of a lot of excessive writing trying to discribe the enormous landscape that spreads out around this minature little dude...
Lastly, your drawings are really good! I wish I could draw like that!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Im glad you like them! Maybe I'll do a drawing every couple of chapters for scenes I like...
Date: January 26 2014 6:14 PM Title: Bios
Wow, Kim is really losing it when it comes to controlling her sexual urges, Tommy better watch out! I doubt he can either since her phermones are making him lust for her as well. A minor criticism of the bios page would be that Kim's size is kind of too small for the picture since that what is I imagined Jessica would look like in comparison with Jack, about half the size of her index finger. She is more like 300-400 feet than 815 feet.
Author's Response:
He is the little speck on her right hand. Using the Giantess Converter on this site I figured out that compared to Kim's 816ft, a 6ft tall human would appear to be 1/2inch proportionally. Every finger has 3 segments, and Tommy is about half the size of one of those segments (in proportion). He is NOT half the size of the entire index finger, because like you said, that would mean she's like 300 ft tall not 800ft. Basically he's really tiny compared to her, about the size of a small raisen, and if she did not have heightened sences and control over her body, he'd be dead already.
I really don't mind if people imagine him to be any size (within reason) in comparison to her, obviously you shouldn't picture him to half her size or something...I'm just saying that I did do the math, I didn't guess how tiny he'd be compared to her when I wrote this, or when I drew that picture.
Date: January 26 2014 3:55 PM Title: Bios
Sorry about that, I think he looks smaller in the image because he appears far away in the image I guess. In hindsight, the size is ok and I was too quick to make a comment. It's been a while since you updated after all. When you say he is perhaps half the size of an index finger that seems reaonable and I must mention I liked this story enough to favourite it months before making that comment.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you like this...Like I said up there^, I don't really mind what size people picture him, as long as its not like half her size or something ridiculous like that. In my mind though, he is half the size of one of the segments of an index finger in comparison to her. Basically he is 1/6th tall of her index finger, and the only reason he's not been crushed is because she has super dexterity. Sorry about the confusion.
Date: January 26 2014 2:40 PM Title: Bios
I expected Tommy to be bigger, especially with all the interaction that's been going on. I can't help but feel you haven't thought the sizes through. He seems too small.
Author's Response:
I did think things through, I've expressed throughout the whole story that the ONLY reason Kim's been able to interact with him on the level she has is because she has heightened sences and control over her body (except during sex as she just showed but Tommy escaped to his countertop). In fact the only reason she can even hear him most of the time is due to this too, most Lyrians just hear squeaks unless they are held up to ear...Half an inch in comparison to her is about half the length of a legment on an average index finger, about the size of a small raisen, etc...<These are all things I've used to describe his size before I made a bios page.
Sorry if the size isn't to your liking but its a little too late to change it now, considering I've described this size throughout all my chapters.
Date: January 26 2014 2:45 AM Title: Bios
Bios page are nice, not sure if everyone is doing it since it is mostly JS, TinyDann and OHH who are using it and myself. I was expecting a real picture but the drawings add a personal touch, good job.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the drawings are rather cartoony I'll admit...I'm sure some people would've prolly preferred real pictures, but I wanted an excuse to draw something, and your right about the 'personal touch' thing. Anyway, I got another chapter in the works, it should be up soon so look forward to it!