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Reviewer: Nsolo6672 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks man! I hope that you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope it's the blonde Amazon making contact with Ava. She'll need the help of someone powerful to help her rescue Parker from these two looney tunettes.

Author's Response:

"Looney Tunettes" - I like that one!  And I'm not sure if the Amazon will be as helpful as we think, at least for now...

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, Parker's skin is going to permanently smell like girlfeet! Maybe not such a bad thing?

This 'un-relenting' foot torture, is begining to dominate the story.  Maybe, he could get to take a bath with one of them....

-Heh, heh, heh,... just thought that I'd remind you , again... ;`)



Author's Response:

Haha, I agree Cat.  And don't worry - I haven't forgotten about your awesome suggestion!  We still have a couple days (within the world of the story) until we'll see the bath, though.

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