[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, Parker keeps running into all these girls with low self-esteem. Hope his luck changes in the next few chapters.
Author's Response:
Haha, that's actually significant...And thanks for continuing to read this over! I'm sure you know as well as me how much these comments help.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww, Man... it doesn't look good for Parker now! He's got untill firday? Maybe Kate would hesitate to squash him if... she would take a look at him for what he really is, you know. He like's it! If he survives the stinch bath inside her sweaty running sock, he could maybe just start being a little more useful to her?
I think he has enough time to change her way of thinking ;`)
I'd like to see Parker take a bath with her. A long hot BATH!
Author's Response:
We'll see, Cat...And hmmm, a bath? I might be able to make that happen. I mean, she'll have to clean herself up on Friday before her big party, right?
[Report This]Date: March 10 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Whew! This girl is definitely messed up. I've seen magazine racks, in doctors' waiting rooms, with fewer issues.
Author's Response:
Haha good one Cary, I most definitely agree!
Date: March 10 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good stuff! If you write enough chapters he may end up under every woman's foot in the town. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Good for our intents and purposes, not for his, haha.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Katie is such a brat, no I did not feel any symphathy from her outburst: the only thing it made me do is roll my eyes and think: "what a drama queen!" The only person I feel bad for here is parker whose gotta endure tortures worse than murder convicts get all because a teenage girls got high school drama!
Great chapter! The beginning where Parkers been remembering his fucked up life and contemplates suicide is awesome! It filled mewuith a dread and emptiness that not too many stories can pull off sucessfully. Its also real easy for me to jump into the his shoes, something that speaks to your writting and descriptiveness. Props to this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, Gadget! I'm glad that you liked the beginning parts - I really tried to get into Parker's head on that one. And haha, I'm sure that we all knew a few Katies in high school/college. I hope that you continue to enjoy!