Reviewer: sketch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

This story is actually pretty good.  And Parker has quite the decision to make.

Right now, I would want to stick with Ava, but there's no guarantee that she will remain sweet and calm.

Running is a gamble as well.  Where will he go, can he even get out of the house, and then what?  And how pissed will Ava be if he can't get someplace safe before she finds him again.

 

Since the Amazon is now connected to someone connected to Ava, staying with her might bring him closer to a solution.  However, Ava has shown no interest in Parker's story than what she made up herself.  I don't know if he would make it past his friend Victoria in his tale before Ava accuses him of being a cheater with a secret girlfriend.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review sketch! I agree, there's definitely a lot of different things that should factor into this decision.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow what an amazing chapter. I love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks aaron, I can't wait to put it out!