[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 13 Loud Noise
Two minor corrections: you wrote "sacred," when you meant "scared." And, "single" when you meant "signal." Other than that? I found it enjoyable enough to wait for the 14th chapter! ;-)
Author's Response:
Quite right, I went ahead and fixed the errors, thanks. Guess I need to do more than one read through before publishing. Sloppy editing on my part. I'm glad to hear it's worth the wait, I hope I don't have to make you wait too long.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 Loud Noise
Glad to see you back and still writing this tale. I reaffirm my earlier statement. Shouta is an ass and is giving a very bad first impression of the Japanese men to the leader of the natives. Someone is going to have to teach him the value of tact. Still good stuff! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Lot of Shouta hate recently. I'd try to defend him, but I'll do that with my writing hopefully.. Thanks for your thoughts.