Date: November 01 2013 12:07 PM Title: Prologue
Nice start - can't wait to see what you've got in store for Jared!
Thanks for reading. Unfortuntely you might have to wait a while, since due to personal reasons I have decided to take a really long break from this story.
Sorry about that.
Date: May 20 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beach Week
Something tells me Jared will spend half of chapter 3 thinking/hoping/praying he's having a hung-over hallucination.
don't forget running/screaming/hiding he'll be doing an awful lot of that as well
Date: May 20 2013 10:12 AM Title: Prologue
"I hope the destination is worth the journey."
Well, now, that all depends, Jared. To paraphrase an old jazz tune: "Is you is, or is you ain't, a macrophiliac?"
This review is genius. I had to read it a couple of times to get what you were saying.
anyways I'd say for Jared the destination is not worth it, but for Mary and Jenna on the other hand... this trip might actually turn out pretty good for them