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Date: January 24 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

Pink and black leotards can change their spots.



Author's Response: The University of Georgia Dalmatians? Nah! Doesn't have quite the same ring as "Bulldogs."

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

I found it hard to visualize or''imagine' reading, or - "'Masochistically' reading a manuscript."..  Ha! great stuff! 

Mars Hall was Marshall U. ?   CooL Breeze whistles through the trees...   Mostly Blonde,  yeah...



Author's Response: Well, wouldn't _you_ feel like a glutton for punishment, if you persisted in reading what you felt were the paranoid "ravings" of an old friend?

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

I was not expecting this story to be brought back to life. But I'm glad it is.



Author's Response: And, I'm even more glad that you're back aboard. :-)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well, I guess that answers my question....  Baton Twirlers it is!  Ha!  Well, Im kinda glad that you didn't allow me to corrupt you like that, say's alot for your moxy, and I wouldn't want to be the one who dragged you into the gutter either...

So, I hope that I didn't offend you, Cary.  It wasn't my intention, I just happened to notice that story added to mine, and sat down and pumped it out in less then an hour!

However, If I did offend you just delete it...  No big deal, and let me say that I'm truely sorry about that, I really didn't mean to, I thought that you would find it funny? 

Sorry, :(



Author's Response: No biggie, Wild C! :-) Truth to tell, I've depicted soft-core shower scenes, before. So, I'll probably do a slight ret-con of your chapter 4...as soon as I update some more of my wips. Fair enough?

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh No!  I hope they don't bring in Richard Simmons and start jazzercizing !  =/

- this is like a weird '2-pronged' -approach, at the twilight-zone and Paris Hilton's back yard doggy house...heh,heh.   Paris has a lot of mini-pups and a pretty fancy scaled down house, built just for them.  I suppose their all 'fixed',  just hanging out, waiting for their mistress to return...their own little "Mars Hall".



Author's Response: Not quite! But, close! Btw: it's strange you should mention Paris Hilton. She once featured in a discontinued shrink-story I did for Giantess City! If my Muse doesn't mind being further over-worked, I might try to re-create it, here, someday.

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Date: September 09 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

It all comes down to mind over fecal matter



Author's Response: Theoretically; "if you don't mind, it don't matter." ;-)

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Date: September 09 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

Molasses and Shit. Quite a mixture LOL.



Author's Response: One of the more colorful expletives popular when I was a kid (back in the prehistoric 1960's).

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

And the two stories cross over. It doesn't look good for our professor, Keep this story going.



Author's Response: From your mouth to Wildcatman's crossed fingers. ;-)

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Date: August 11 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Change the world for the better! I don't believe the aliens. 



Author's Response: Smart man. :-)

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Date: August 10 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well, while passing through Indiania 'Tom Petty's tune's should've been filling in the background  ;)  ---  The Bowling Ball state?  LOL!  ;=D --- That's flippin halarious Dude!  

P.S. How loyal could an Ill. lurker be?  ( how much wood could a woodchuck chuck) ;`) 



Author's Response: Or, as they might put it in Punxatawney, Pennsylvania: "How much ground could a groundhog hog, if a groundhog could hog ground?"

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Date: August 10 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

Shades of Cheetah



Author's Response: More like Giganta, I'd say.

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Date: August 10 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Randy Batchelor! Why am I just now laughing at that?

Good one.



Author's Response: Maybe I was _too_ subtle? ;-)

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Date: August 09 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

A plot twist I did not see comming. Wonder what going to happen next?



Author's Response: Insert sadistic laughter here. ;-)

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Date: August 09 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

I know the pun's not in any way accurately relevant to the story, but I'm just aching to make the pun: "Welcome to Mrs Baton's kitchen".



Author's Response: I confess I'll have to look that one up. But, once I do, I'm sure its brilliance will be irrefutable. ;-)

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Date: August 08 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

If I understand this right, the cops got shrunk. Hope our hereo can get away.

 

There are times I wonder how you can keep all these stories straight.

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Thank you; I will. As for how I keep them straight? One part, a little re-reading. Another part, a miraculously good memory.

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Date: June 30 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

And with inflation, 40 dollars is the new 30 dollars LOL.



Author's Response: I depreciate your mathematical prowess. ;-D

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Date: June 30 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

I dream of Gina... best I could come up with.



Author's Response: Actually, that was pretty good! :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

A Ford escape! Good choice. At least he should not be hard to feed at his small size.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: I'll do my best to not disappoint you. Although, I might be updating THE THIN LINE, first.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh NO!  Not Randy!  Randy why,....WHY?  Why did he have to be so brave.....



Author's Response: That's a question of anyone in the military who makes the ultimate sacrifice on the battlefield. And, I don't think there's any clear-cut answer. As for how I pictured Randy in my mind's eye? Imagine if Art Hindle had played "Dan Weaver" on FALLING SKIES, instead of Will Patton.

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Date: June 26 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

It does sound like the plot of a B move. It sounds like a scarey world with nano-parasites everywhere,



Author's Response: And, even scarier is the thought that I still haven't made up my mind as to whether or not the Bad Guys will lose!

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