Date: May 20 2013 8:30 PM Title: Nicole - truce and plotting.
Kate is too much of a pushover. If she really cares about her micros she really should've told amber the F--- off and not been so level headed. Even if the zone and micros are "property" then amber still screwed up. Idk. It's hard to believe that Kate cares so much yet lets these other girls walk all over her.
Author's Response: Yes, explanations are coming (already long-planned, just struggling with... several things) - I hope Kate's thoughts will convince You, but please be sure to let me know if she still seems "too much" or "too little" of literally anything later - or just unbelievable about anything (after all, we have not found out her thoughts about this sudden "change" yet). Keep in mind that their lives are very different from ours and also young girls are.. well, also different (but have I gone too far with her earlier passiveness? it is too late to fix now, but I would love to know what You think) (and also.. I often struggle between what I "want" the characters to do at any moment - not only Kate - and what I "feel" the characters would do in a given situation - two completely different things, I assume You are speaking about the latter - just an unnecessary reminder to distinguish them)